Talk:Bartolomea Acciaioli

Bartolomea Acciaioli is currently a Royalty, nobility and heraldry good article nominee. Nominated by Borsoka (talk) at 03:20, 17 February 2025 (UTC) An editor has indicated a willingness to review the article in accordance with the good article criteria and will decide whether or not to list it as a good article. Comments are welcome from any editor who has not nominated or contributed significantly to this article. This review will be closed by the first reviewer. To add comments to this review, click discuss review and edit the page. Short description: Despoina of Morea

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Nominator: Borsoka (talk · contribs) 03:20, 17 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Amir Ghandi (talk · contribs) 16:14, 28 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.

   a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

A relatively short article, but of high quality, as it already meets many of the criteria. My comments therefore will be mostly nitpicks.

• Understandably, the article doesn't have many images
• The image of the map is properly sourced and licensed, provided with an Alt text and uses upright

• Earwig gives an 8.3% chance of copyright violation, which means it is unlikely
• How are Lock (1995) and Zečević (2014) reliable? (I say this as someone who is not familiar with this historical period and it's scholars; the other sources are of high quality due to their publishers)
• The article is broad in its coverage and uses every source possible.

Please provide the texts for the following sentences:

• The Byzantine historian, Laonikos Chalkokondyles recorded that she was "said to be the most beautiful of all the women who at that time were renowned for their beauty"
• He disinherited Bartolomea by distributing his properties between his younger daughter, Francesca, his illegitimate son, Antonio, and the church of Saint Mary of Athens (the Parthenon)
• Her husband survived her, but suffered from severe depression till the end of his life. He died in 1407.

• They released him only after he promised to persuade Theodore to cede Argos to the Venetians, but Theodore I was unwilling to accept his father-in-law's advice, although the Venetians could hold Nerio's town, Megara, until they received Argos from Theodore 1. Why the word 'advice'? It looks more like a persuasion 2. The sentences starting from the word 'although' do not relate with the previous sentences, also seem to be redundant. My suggestion would be to delete them.
• , and they wanted I would change 'wanted' to 'sought'.
• Eventually, Francesca's husband, Carlo I Tocco, realised that he was unable to keep Corinth on the long run Why?